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Submitted: February 21
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The Keeper - 1.16.by *Lingrimm

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*CircuitDruid Feb 21, 2013

While I find the dialogue so far a tiny bit clunky, the illustration is completely making up for it, the characters design, the composition and the facial expression is creating a very expressive story so far, and I find myself looking forward to more!

*Lingrimm Feb 21, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

Thank you~
_{What do you mean "I find dialogue so far a tiny bit clunky"? Bad translation or something else?}

*CircuitDruid Feb 22, 2013

Some things are phrased a little... oddly? for example on this page "Its a pity that he had not come to say goodbye personally" uses both past and present tense. However in most of the pages the English is correct, but not how one would naturally speak. For example I would expect to hear "If your finished already, then I will go". Overall these are the kinds of things you tend to notice frequently not because of bad writing skills but when the author is not a native speaker.

Honestly I don't think its making any difference on how much I have enjoyed it at all, perhaps because it is a new world.

however, if you were planning to release this in print finding yourself an editor or some willing beta readers could not do any harm.

Wow, I feel kind of cold now >.> you are an incredible artist and the quality your graphic story is honestly really inspiring to me!

*Lingrimm Feb 22, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

We don't mind about some notes and fixes, it's very useful for us C:
And thank you very much again!

*CircuitDruid Feb 22, 2013

Glad to know I did not offend!

~World-Inside-Me Feb 21, 2013 Student General Artist

This is a truly beautiful page! The art is just mesmerizing and the colouring, as always, is simply perfect - the lighting and details all standing out wonderfully!

=ms-laika Feb 21, 2013 Traditional Artist

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