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~MLAproduction Feb 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
"you have some funky grammar issues with this page.

this is probably the best fix in terms of tense and grammar:

"I did not realize that there were Bones who were worse than Anteros"

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anyway the page itself is wonderful with the contrast of soft and hard outlines.
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~S-Lioness Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
dude watch out for grammar mistakes
"I didn't even realized" ---> "I didn't even realize"
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~Ningeko16 Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oooooooooooooooooooh -u-
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~World-Inside-Me Feb 2, 2013  Student General Artist
This is such a gorgeous page~ :love:
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*blinded07 Feb 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
this comic is so interesting. READY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTAHHH
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I must say Lingrimm that was a good first chapter , loved the world building at the end. And yes lord Ryonga there are beings worse then Anteros you will meet them soon enough.
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Какой красивый кот. *_*
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*Lingrimm Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Его в начале следующей главы в избытке).
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=OrangeAlisha Feb 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Таки зацепил этот стрип С: Но рискну высказаться по поводу реплики х)
1) I did not even realize (если есть did, то глагол уже не надо ставить в прошедшее время)
2) ...who are more worse... (worse - уже в сравнительной степени, more здесь совершенно лишнее)
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*Lingrimm Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Хорошоу, тогда поправь нас правильно чтобы было правильно! хD
Мы очень лошарские после дачи, так что будем рады критике.
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